THE SEVENTH CHANCE

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Hello, Everyone,

Here is a small snippet from THE SEVENTH CHANCE that I revised because I wasn’t satisfied with it.

As Amato stood in the doorway to their bedroom, he imagined Bob-Ann’s conversation with Lila. She’d never learned how to love and accept herself. Taking off his shoes, he walked to the side of the bed and sat down on it.
Bob-Ann awoke at once.
“Do you want to talk about it?”
“Why are you here?” Bob-Ann asked, ignoring his question.
“Have you forgotten you’re my wife and we live here?”
“I thought…”
“You thought what?” Amato replied, interrupting her with a harsh tone in his voice.
“You’re angry.”

Have a lovely day.

Pat Garcia

Shalom shalom

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11 thoughts on “THE SEVENTH CHANCE”

    1. Hi,
      Thank you so much. I’m struggling with the Flash Fiction piece.But I’m hanging in there.
      Shalom shalom

    1. Thank you for dropping by, Lisa. I look forward to unpacking it.
      Shalom shalom

    1. Hi,
      You’re right. Lila is jealous but the tide will turn.
      Shalom shalom

  5. Kayelle Allen – Kayelle Allen writes MM Sci-Fi Romance, Mythic Heroes, Immortal Gamers, and Warriors Who Purr. Her unstoppable, unshakeable, unforgettable characters fill a complex universe with diverse settings and fascinating people, some of whom think they're not fictional. Fortunately, Kayelle keeps them all in line, or at least that's what she tells her therapist. She's also a US Navy veteran and has been married so long she's tenured.
    Kayelle Allen says:

    “Have you forgotten you’re my wife?” What a question!

    1. Hi,
      I really like that question. Amato can be smart-alecky when he’s serious.
      Shalom shalom

  6. lisabetsarai – I became addicted to words at an early age. I began reading when I was four. I wrote my first story at five years old and my first poem at seven. Since then, I have written plays, tutorials, scholarly articles, marketing brochures, software specifications, self-help books, press releases, a five-hundred page dissertation, and lots of erotica and erotic romance – nearly one hundred titles, and counting, in nearly every sub-genre—paranormal, scifi, ménage, BDSM, GLBT, and more. Regardless of the genre, every one of my stories illustrates my motto: Imagination is the ultimate aphrodisiac.
    lisabetsarai says:

    Is Bob-Ann transgender?

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