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Hello, Everyone,
My Snippet for today continues with a second excerpt from Boteè and The Strain Man.
Hello, Everyone,
My Snippet for today continues with a second excerpt from Boteè and The Strain Man.
EXCERPT
Boteè and the Strain Man
Strain Man played the first trio, and the spotlight appeared, covering her with light from her head to her feet. The music lifted her body, lying it flat as if she lay on a cot. The music raised her from the ground and lulled her into a trance. She looked up at the sky as he transported her with the musical notes he played. It was peaceful, and she began to snore. Strain Man moved into the second trio to wake her. The light over her head brightened, and she felt like she was lying on clouds of sheet music.
Suddenly, she lay before Strain Man. He bowed his head towards her. His cone-shaped head shone, and his metallic clothing looked absolutely chic.
Strange, she thought, looking at him, there are no stars in heaven.
Strain Main replied with the third trio movement of The Stars and Stripes Forever. It was the only song he knew from her planet to communicate with her. “They’ll come. They’re just over the horizon.”
Boteè’s dark contralto answer made his face shine, “Amen, Amen, Amen.” She sang.
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Have a lovely rest of the week.
Shalom shalom
Pat Garcia
https://patgarciaauthor.com/?p=8519
You know, whenever I read something written by you, I feel like the words carry me… it’s like poetry… like wings, light and airy… words weaving a web… unique.
This has the texture of a lucid dream, Pat.
Lovely.
Lovely, poetic excerpt, Pat.
You have a lyrical style of writing Pat. Gentle yet powerful.
❤️