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Hello, Everyone,
Here is a new snippet from my Anthology of Flash Fiction Stories that will be released in winter.
Wishing all of you a lovely day.
EXCERPT:
The man worked hard. He and his three sons hammered and pitched each wooden plank together. Sure, people thought he was crazy, but that didn’t disturb him. He closed his ears to what others said. If he were honest, and he was, he didn’t give a hoot. He hadn’t made it so far in life by seeking the approval of others.
The other day, his sons had informed him that the neighbors thought he was insane. He had laughed and told his sons to get to work before he fired them. After all, he was not only their father but their employer. No one would give them the amount of money for the work they did for him. They had no choice.
The father gazed down at the oldest son. The son looked up at the sun. The old man thought about the discussion they had had the night before. His sons thought he was a daydreamer and had invited a lawyer to his house without his permission. Their excuse for not telling him had him laughing. They wanted to rattle his brain.
After talking with him, the lawyer said that declaring their father insane wouldn’t work. Besides, the majority of the judges knew him too well as that no-nonsense man who spoke what he thought.
The sons’ wives were outraged, shouting they had become the laughingstock of the whole town, maybe the whole world. They were sick and tired of people pointing fingers at them. So, what, the old man said. They had tried to explain what it meant to them not to be among the popular crowd. They considered these people their friends.
Come to my house for tea; my wife would enjoy your company, he’d answered back.
Shalom shalom
Pat Garcia
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It sounds like his kids are ungrateful brats! Lol! I can’t wait to read the end.
Yvette M Calleiro 🙂
http://yvettemcalleiro.blogspot.com
Your writing is amazing. Sort of a whirlwind. Starts like a small eddy but twirls around and grows. You turn your head as it builds, rises above you. You wait and watch. WOW!
Makes me want to know exactly what they’re building!
I kept waiting for it to be Noah. 🙂
This is very interesting and makes me wonder where this will lead to.
An interesting riff on the Noah story, Pat!
You’re so creative, Pat!
And I’ll bet this is exactly how Noah’s neighbors treated him.